Short Film - Script
Scene opens with the
older officer sat down at the table with some letters.
The younger officer
walks up to the table and salutes to the older officer
The older officer
looks up at him for a couple seconds, then finishes reading the letter. He then
stands, gives a very little salute and says:
“You must be my new Lieutenant (Said as Left- tenant)”
The younger officer
then replies:
“Sir Yes Sir! Second Lieutenant
Lawrence Baker, reporting for duty sir”
The older man signals
to Lawrence to sit down with him at the table where there is a bunch of letters
and a chess set. He follows this up by saying:
“Lawrence eh? Just like that chap
in the Desert (referring to Lawrence of
Arabia). Fancy a game of chess?
Lawrence agrees to the
game with a nod of his head.
The old man then
speaks again:
“Chess is a great game for
officers to play, it really is like commanding a battle and every move could
mean a win or a loss…”
The younger officer
then sees that the older officer has left a pawn in the open and quickly moves
one of his knights to take it; and then says with a big grin:
“A mistake like that”
The officer is unfazed
by this and shakes his head, and says:
“You’re the one who has made the
mistake…” he then moves one of his pieces
to take his knight, and follows this up with “ Check” with no emotion of his face.
Lawrence has a shocked
looked on his face and then quickly moves another of his pieces to take the
oppositions piece.
The older officer
shakes his head again, looks at the younger officer and then moves another piece
and then says:
“Check Mate”
Lawrence is stunned
“But… But… how? You were just throwing pieces away, how is that fair?”
The older man then
relaxes again and picks up another letter and begins saying:
“In war you need to make
sacrifices in one place to make a gain elsewhere. It has been done all through
history in past wars all the way back to the Romans, and if any other war
happens in the future, which would be very unlikely, it will happen then. You need
to learn this if you ever want to become as successful as me”
(this
line is said slowly with cuts in it after a few words have been said to make it
look like he is saying it very seriously. As he is speaking the camera will
zoom in on him to show his facial expressions)
Lawrence is shocked by
what he has just heard and then says:
“But these are British men, your
men, you are throwing away, men on our side of the war, friends not foes. These
men loved and were loved and now what? They now lie in some field where poppies
blow. Between the crosses row on row. You would rather throw these men away to
make a gain of what?! A few metres. I was in those trenches I know what it is
like and now I see you treat us like pawns.”
(this
line will be said rather quickly because he is angry about the he has reacted
and whats to get his point through. The camera will be a wide shot as he will
be standing up and moving around picking up chess pieces to make it look like
he really cares)
The older man is now
angry and replies:
“Careful Lawrence, remember who
you are speaking to. This is the only way this war of attrition can be won,
unless you have a new tactic? … No? Didn’t think so. I was like you when I was
first promoted and I tried new tactics but they failed and I lost some good men
and great friends. So trust me this is the best way for us and them.
(it
now goes back to slowly speaking with cuts. He will also stand up when speaking
to make him look aggressive and put the younger officer back in his place. When
he is finished he will sit back down sitting up straight while officer I
slouched down to show that the general has won)
Lawrence is silent, he
goes to speak and then stops he thinks about what he wants to say but can’t
think of what to say. The camera then fades while on him and then the scene
ends.
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